RE: The 798 bus // Horror story

You certainly do have a horror story here. The case of the missing bus and the police station that isn't there. Creepy. Your description of the graveyard is heavy with atmosphere. And that narrative has a good story arc.

The story, however, suffers from editing errors. These interfere with the narrative flow. It seems some of the issues might be translation related. If you use an online translator, that may help to clear up the more dramatic errors.

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