The scorpion project // End of story
Drawing prepared for @coolxxx
The most enigmatic of the case that in the end Michael built not a time machine, but a machine that served to freeze his brother to save him and show the world his discovery of his serum as a cure, time passed about fifty years since that tragic accident that happened to Vladimir, the most amazing thing is that he was saved, then as proposed by his brother would wake up in the future.
Already to be fulfilled the cross ta years the machine that was in the basement formerly te the laboratory, the machine begins to sound and release a gas opening, Vladimir wakes up sees that the place was not equal, is astonished very weak walks towards a mventa to see, when this sees realizes that it had traveled towards the future as he believed, but that was not the reality, suddenly sele approaches two young people towards the calls it uncle despertaste, but the weak man faints again.
After a couple of days Vladimir wakes up in a well-kept room, and there are two young people, a teenager and a pretty girl already somewhat more mature, when they embrace him they tell him that they are his nephews, children of his brother Michael, he hands him an envelope, he asks him what it is, they tell him all your answers uncle, that our father left you when he woke up, He opens the envelope and discovers the truth, also a box that he left as a gift, it was a Nobel Prize medal, thanks to his discovery of his brother, all the honors he left to his brother Vladimir, this man hugs his nephews and cries.
The joy of having a family was another gift from his brother, unfortunately Michael died before he woke up, his nephews asked him who his father was, he happily said that is my big brother, I will tell you how he was in life and how we were both, so Vladimir kept the secret of his brother to have frozen him and give him a family to take care of.
This is such a sweet story. Technically, we don't accept serials here. Each story has to stand alone. However, you didn't know that when you began the story, so for only this one time it will be considered.
The syntax is improved over previous posts. One thing you have to look for is the blended words, Spanish and English, such as mventa and despertaste,
It's interesting the way the serum ended up saving Vladimir, and other people, by freezing them. The experiment with the scorpion paid off!
Please be sure to read the work of other writers in the community and share comments with them. We are urging everyone who posts in The Ink Well to take this step, going forward, to ensure our community members are supporting one another. (We also have this in The Ink Well community rules on our home page and in our weekly writing prompts.) Thank you!
Thank you for posting your story in the Ink Well community.