RE: Animus | The Ink Well Weekly Fiction Prompt #4: The Way Home

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Hello @iamraincrystal,
This is extremely well written. You set a scene so that I can see it before my eyes.

You capture the cynicism of the 'team' and the politician in one simple line:

my PR team made to come up with a maternal side to my image—despite my being single

However, I'm having trouble figuring out where the story is going. It's like a piece of something larger, with a beginning and an end that is hidden from me.



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I believe this is a serial story... a continuation from one of the Fast and Furious Festival prompts. Right, @iamraincrystal?

I encourage you to write complete stories for the prompts, even if they are very short. That makes the most satisfying reader experience. Readers are looking to be introduced to a character who experiences a challenge, and then that challenge is resolved by the end.

Thank you for sharing your work in The Ink Well. We appreciate you!

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