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imagine the time
is it right
it always is

are you right
head in clouds
eyes of despair

travel in body
feel it in soul
heart, is it yours

no options left
one way to go
love, and trust


Better and better
:ervin :lemark



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Very cool poem I love it, you always have to be in the right place at the right time to be happy, thank you for this poem.

PS: I'm commenting at 11:30 PM.

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Hey, thanks a lot.

What a coincidence !LOLZ

Why 11:30? Well, yesterday late in the evening I was reading a book. When I stopped I asked myself what the time was? 11:30 pm I answered. then i took the phone to check it and ... it really was 11:30. OK, let's celebrate this with a short poem, was my conclusion :)

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What a great story, how out of small moments can come good writing and this is no exception, hug and thank you very much ♥

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Perhaps the most difficult thing is to be happy, regardless of the circumstances or the place. Beautiful poem. Greetings @ervin-lemark

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Thank you very much. Maybe being happy is overrated? !LOLZ

Perhaps being satisfied and content in the company of your loved ones is enough?

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